Hi everyone ,
I'm going to introduce to you someone who is reaaly important for me.
Şafak Pavey is a Turkish diplomat and politician.She graduated from the department of International Relationships.She knows Turkish,English,German,Italien,Arabic and Persian.She can also speak the International Sign Language.She worked for disabled people in United Nations.Then she returned to Turkey.She was chosen as a deputy.While she was taking art education in Sweden,she was diagnosed with brain tumour.Because of an accident,she lost her arm and leg.Her situation is mentioned to a thesis in Zurich University.Now,she has many important international roles in parliaments.When I read her life story,I felt bad.She is a strong woman.She lost her arm and leg but she didn't lose her life energy.There is an event which made her heart bleed more than the accident.Immediately after the accident,her husband left her.I hate such people.I admire this woman.Being disabled is very difficult in our country.Despite everything,she is full with hope.She said,I want to go on my education,I want to do everything with my right arm.She is very valuable,special.Everyone should know her life and take some lessons from it.
Dear Merve,
YanıtlaSilI'm so happy due to your choice, because I admire people like Şafak Pavey. They are so courageous that they can do the things we don't even dare. They never give up and they stick heart and soul to life.I like your usage of grammar and construction of reflection. Also, I want to suggest something about your reflection. For example, you should pay attention to usage of capital letters and usage of "the" like "in THE United Nations". Finally, you can tell more thing about the accident. Good work!
All the best :).